mise en scene creativity

I think these still images are creative as having the artist behind the wire fence symbolises the artist being strapped or stuck in a situation/frame of mind.The bright lighting on the artist show her in a pure, clean light.This still is effective as the use of the close up shot puts the focus of the shot it onto the artist rather than the wire frame, indicating she is trapped.
I do not like the image of the artist looking into the distance as the use of location is not good as you can see cars in the background and this distracts form the artist on screen. To improve this shot I would use an over the shoulder shot of the artist looking into the distance. This is because the camera can then focus on the event that is happening in the background of the shot.