Draft music video

As this is a draft of the final video I have analysed different aspects of the video I think I could improve. At some points the editing does not cut to the beat. I have also over used some shots such as the artist taking the pill, falling over and the reverse footage of the artist walking up the stairs. I believe to improve this I will need to use a wider variety of shots to keep the viewer interested in the video and develop an understanding of the concept as well as the genre of music video.